'Beauty sucked into their mouth holes' ❤️❤️❤️ oh, I know this feeling.
This is the first part I've read and now have to go find 1-3.
I think we're on a similar mission and I see echoes of parts of my own story that I haven't been brave enough to tell yet. Thank you so much for telling yours.
With so much love from one Unshaming human to another. ❤️
Simply incredible. This was my favourite of the 4 parts and I can't believe it didn't make it into the final draft. I read it too quickly at first, my heart racing, so I immediately re-read it. I especially love "the first kiss of the familiar hard, round mouth" and your impressions of the world from above: "the enormity and the smallness too." So captivating.
'Beauty sucked into their mouth holes' ❤️❤️❤️ oh, I know this feeling.
This is the first part I've read and now have to go find 1-3.
I think we're on a similar mission and I see echoes of parts of my own story that I haven't been brave enough to tell yet. Thank you so much for telling yours.
With so much love from one Unshaming human to another. ❤️
Simply incredible. This was my favourite of the 4 parts and I can't believe it didn't make it into the final draft. I read it too quickly at first, my heart racing, so I immediately re-read it. I especially love "the first kiss of the familiar hard, round mouth" and your impressions of the world from above: "the enormity and the smallness too." So captivating.
And of course, the comma should remain.
I love parts. This was a fantastic chunk. I started with part4 by accident and it makes me want to read 1, 2, 3 even more.
Amazing.